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Okay, basically these creatures are the Furnye. (Fur-Nie)

They are sorta Fox-like creatures with big ears and Wings. They are invisible to the human race but can be seen by some who are born with the ability to see them.

Each Human has a Furnye watcher. Furnye can cause telekinetic influnces to there human to possibly help make they right choice.

Furnye wings are not like normal wings. To fly they Think of Flight and there wings appear as a sort of energy. Though when hurt furnyes cannot produce enough energy to bring there wings out to fly. In the bottum corner of the Furnye's wing is a symbol which is different for each Furnye.

Furnye are about a bit shorter than knee height.
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I don't mean to sound rude, but I think you need to work on this concept a bit more. I'll start by saying what I like about them and then give you some constructive criticism on how to improve what I think needs a bit more thought.
I like the fact that they have a story behind them, that's always good to help people understand the species and feel connected to it. But their physical appearance is currently lacking. Right now they're not more than foxes with wings, which a lot of people will draw, not knowing there's a specie that looks like that. That can turn out to be a problem if you wish for this to be a closed species in the feature. You need to ask yourself "what makes my species different from all the other winged foxes out there?". Is it that their wings have a specific shape? Is it the fact that they have 6 legs instead of 4? Is it that they're actually the size of a mouse? It is the fact that they always have a very distinct color pattern? Or is it simply that their art style can be easily recognized and attributed to you nekoi? You need to figure out a way to make your species stand out from the others and make it unique. This species might be a good illustration of what I'm trying to say. It's just a winged canine, but there's something that sets it apart from the other winged canines. And that is what I'd like to see on this species :)